Smiling Thoughts- A Poetry Challenge

Smiling Thoughts

When I met you I tasted life

Like a bud, I blossom, I breathe

Never again would I strife

For your love and care are so deep

Smiling thoughts of you conquered me

In the morn when I make my coffee,

When I eat, or laugh you’re with me,

And everywhere it’s you I see,

Along the road, those lovely trees,

At my work with my Apple breeze,

These words I’m writing now, I grace

Because you put smile on my face

You’re the best part of my everyday

And at night when I lay down to sleep

Still there you are all over me

Smiling thoughts of you lingers great!

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  1. Reblogged this on Four Blue Hills (A repository, of sorts) and commented:
    A poetry challenge, for those of you who have the ability to put your words in such a fantastic form! Not moi. I just enjoy reading.

  2. Beautifully written! You are so lucky to have a partner who resonates the radiance of love to the universe.. 🙂

  3. I smell the smile upon her face, of sun and rainbow her kisses taste, and not a second will I waste, moving quick or making haste. I’ll take my time and love her slow, never conscious where others go. Our constant movement to and fro, her sighs to heaven drift and go. As I hold her tight and whisper dear, “Let us drift and disappear.”

    Love your poetry, so much so, I was inspired to write my own. Peace.

    • Wow! Your poetry is not only good but it is also very captivating and full of affection. I love it! Thanks for sharing it, and I appreciate very much that my poem inspired you 🙂
      Have a nice day!

  4. How lovely! 🙂
    Thank you for your visit and kind comment.

  5. Lovely piece! Smiling thoughts! Suspense! Subject left to the imaginations. I really love this!

  6. You just wrote that! Wow. Does not smack of just written. Smacks of a lot of thoughtful insights. Love. And makes me smile. Thank you.

  7. What a lovely poem!

  8. This was a beautiful passage. I absolutely enjoyed reading this. and the photos are beautiful and so romantic. Wonderful post

    • Thanks Kay, it’s wonderful you enjoyed reading this poem, I just wrote this today for the Poetry Challenge Week 1, but I did not make it on time.
      Anyways I wrote it for my love so there you see us in the photos hehehehe 🙂
      I appreciate your visit. Have a wonderful weekend 🙂

  9. I like that a lot


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